Elias Thorne had always been drawn to solitude, the kind that wrapped around you like a heavy coat on a winter night. When his estranged uncle died, leaving him the crumbling cottage on Eldridge Moor, it seemed like fate’s quiet invitation. The city had chewed him up—endless noise, hollow relationships, a job that drained the color from his days. Here, amid the endless fog-shrouded hills, he could breathe again. Or so he thought.
The drive up was a descent into silence. The road narrowed to a gravel track, flanked by gnarled oaks that twisted like arthritic fingers against the slate-gray sky. By the time Elias pulled up to the cottage, dusk had fallen early, as if the moor itself resented the intrusion of daylight. The house was smaller than he’d imagined, its stone walls moss-covered, windows like dark, unblinking eyes. He fumbled with the ancient key, the door creaking open on hinges that moaned like a dying breath.
Inside, the air was thick, stale with the scent of damp earth and something faintly metallic. Elias flicked on the lantern-style light—electricity was spotty here, the agent had warned—and surveyed his inheritance. A narrow kitchen, a sitting room with a hearth cold as a grave, and a staircase spiraling up to two bedrooms. Dust motes danced lazily in the beam, undisturbed for years. He dropped his bags, lit a fire, and poured a whiskey from the flask in his coat. Tomorrow, he’d clean. Tonight, rest.
Sleep came fitfully. Dreams of fog-choked paths, whispers curling around his ears like smoke. He woke once, certain someone had called his name from the hallway. Just the wind, he told himself, pulling the threadbare quilt tighter.
Morning brought a tentative light, filtering through grimy panes. Elias brewed coffee on a propane stove, the gurgle echoing unnaturally loud. As he scrubbed the kitchen, he noticed oddities. The floorboards in the corner of the sitting room dipped slightly, as if pressed by an invisible weight. A chill lingered there, defying the fire’s warmth. He shrugged it off, blaming poor insulation.
Days blurred into a rhythm. Clean, unpack, walk the moor. The landscape was hypnotic—rolling hills vanishing into mist, ancient standing stones half-buried like forgotten sentinels. Locals in the distant village of Eldridge spoke little, their eyes wary when he mentioned the cottage. ‘Old place,’ one muttered over pints at the pub. ‘Best left to itself.’ Elias laughed it off, but the words itched.
One evening, as rain lashed the windows, he found the journal. Tucked behind a loose stone in the hearth, its leather cover cracked, pages yellowed. Uncle Harlan’s handwriting, erratic and urgent. ‘The veil thins here,’ the first entry read. ‘Nights when the mist rolls thick, I hear them. Not ghosts, no—echoes from beyond. Places where reality frays, and what’s not meant to be slips through.’
Elias read on, heart quickening. Harlan wrote of cold spots that moved, shadows lengthening against the light, time stuttering—clocks losing minutes, then hours. ‘Saw my own face in the mirror once, but younger, eyes hollow. Warning? Or invitation?’ The entries grew frantic: sightings of figures in the fog, whispers naming sins long buried. Harlan vanished one night, body never found.
Skepticism warred with unease. Elias pocketed the journal, told himself it was madness born of isolation. But that night, the cold spot shifted. He felt it first in the kitchen—a breath of winter on his neck as he washed dishes. Turning, he saw nothing, but his reflection in the window lingered a beat too long after he moved.
The moor called stronger now. On walks, Elias felt watched. Birds fell silent as he passed stones etched with faded runes. One afternoon, fog descended sudden and absolute. He lost the path, compass spinning wild. Voices murmured, indistinct—pleas, accusations? Panic clawed, but he stumbled back to the cottage as dusk bled into night, soaked and shivering.
Indoors, the chill had spread. The sitting room felt crowded, air heavy as if bodies pressed close, unseen. Elias lit every lamp, fire roaring, but shadows pooled deeper, edges writhing subtly. He pored over the journal again. Harlan mentioned a ‘heart’ to the thinning—a circle of stones on the hill behind the cottage. ‘There, the worlds brush. Do not go.’
He went at dawn, driven by compulsion. The circle was real: seven slabs in a ring, mossy and tilted, enclosing a patch of barren earth. Elias stepped inside, wind dying instantly. Silence absolute, save his heartbeat. The air hummed, electric. Peering at the ground, he saw not dirt, but a shimmer—like water beneath ice. Kneeling, he touched it. Cold pierced glove and flesh, vision blurring. Flashes: faces, hands reaching, a scream cut short.
He jerked back, gasping. The moor normalized, but prints marred the earth—footprints, small, like a child’s, leading away into mist.
Unease festered. Nights worsened. Whispers solidified into words: ‘Elias… stay…’ His name, from lips he couldn’t place. Clocks reversed, hands crawling backward. In the mirror, his reflection lagged, smiling when he didn’t. Sleep evaded; exhaustion carved hollows under his eyes.
One storm-lashed night, the power failed. Candlelight flickered, throwing grotesque shapes. The cold spot engulfed the sitting room, frost riming windows. Elias clutched the journal, reading aloud to drown the voices. ‘The thinning feeds on regret,’ Harlan wrote. ‘Unfinished lives bleed through.’
Regret. Elias’s mind snagged. The city girl, left without goodbye. The brother estranged. His own dreams abandoned—painting, writing, drowned in routine. Was that it? The moor dredging guilt?
Footsteps pattered upstairs. Slow, deliberate. Elias froze, then climbed, poker from the fire in hand. The bedroom door ajar, child’s prints on dusty floor. Inside, nothing. But the wardrobe mirror showed a figure behind him—a boy, pale, wide-eyed.
He whirled. Empty. Heart hammering, he smashed the glass. Shards glittered, each reflecting the boy, closer.
Dawn brought fragile calm. Elias planned to leave, pack and flee this madness. But as he descended the stairs, the air thickened, moor-mist seeping under door. The circle called, insistent. Against sanity, he went.
Fog swallowed him. The stones loomed, circle pulsing faint light. The shimmer deepened, a pool now, rippling. Whispers crescendoed: ‘Join us… Elias…’
He teetered on edge, peering in. Below, not earth, but a mirror-world: the cottage, himself entering days ago—but wrong. His car, twisted wreckage off the road. Sirens wailing distant. Pain, blinding. Darkness.
Horror dawned. The footprints—his younger self, playing here summers ago with parents, before the accident that killed them. Uncle Harlan took him in briefly, then shipped off to city relatives. Elias never returned, forgot the moor.
But he had returned. In death. The crash on the way here, post-inheritance letter. Spirit tethered, reliving arrival, thinning the veil with unresolved return. The ‘hauntings’—echoes of his own crossing, whispers his pleas, shadows his form fracturing.
The boy in mirror: him, trapped, calling to merge.
Elias—no, the echo—stumbled back. But the pool sucked, reality fraying. Mist billowed, figures emerging—parents, Harlan, others lost to the thinning.
Peace settled, ominous in finality. He stepped through. The cottage stood empty, dust resettling. On moor, fog lifted briefly, revealing fresh footprints fading into nothing. The veil thickened once more, secrets sealed.
